“ Clige Sloan Page 3 ¢ June 6, 1980 The authors put major etiphasis on “natural backyround radiation, ° seemingly treating it as harmless. They also emphasize the inability to "detect® the difference between artificially inéuced anc “naturally” incucod cancers. These can be distinguished on -. ‘the basis of longer period of debilitating disease prior to G@iagnosis. However, difficulty in tracing cause of cancer is hardly a reason to propose exposure of a population to radiation? I am encicaing two papers which deal with the value of the _atouic bomb casualty studies ané also the health effects to be expected with exposure of already daraged people to further radiation. The approach toward measurenent was in terms of the individucl--net the large population. This approach could be Geveloped to predict effects to a particular group such as the Enewetak population. The other problems with the Bender and brill papers include dealing only with genetic effects in live-borgnoffspring (p. 15), neglecting to mention spontaneous abortions and stillbirths which may be expectec to occur, anc estimating raciation-{nduced cancer mortality he fetine lation, ignoring other general health damage and canser susceptibility in future generations. Basing a cesettlenent decision affecting the lives of 500 peorle on the Bender ané Brill inadequate health assessment would be extrezoly imprudent. ZI would be glad to discuss this matter further at your convenicnce. Sincerely, Rosaiia RPertell, PhL, JiSH RB sew é rnc. - Gane Laibmses Wriwee “leq cc: Giff Johnson