W. J. Bair June 18, 1979 Page 4 6) Whose idea was it to use the phrase "dial-a-dose" on page 18? Need I say more? Specific Comments 1. p. J Is "reassessment" or resettlement" the first word in the title? The cover letter used the former. either title. I don’t like How about "Post Cleanup Dose Assessment for the Enewetak Atol]." 2. p. 3,4 The introduction should outline the contents of the paper, or else a summary and/or abstract should precede the introduction. 3. p. 3,4 No mention is made of the extensive soil and IMP sampling undertaken immediately preceding and during the cleanup operation. A brief description or mention of this effort should be made to tie together a more complete history of the sampling effort. 4, p. 4, 7 lines from botton The 10-15 cm increment should be included. 5. p. 4, last line. Description of profile sampling insufficient for me to follow completely. 6. p. 5 - Were quality control (QC) soil samples analyzed? Manuscript doesn't say one way or another. The If QC samples were analyzed, these data should be summarized and presented. Documentation mustbe available to indicate the reliability of the data. This is a very important point in my mind. 7. p. 5 Lines 11,12 What laboratory did the gamma spectroscopy for '3?og9 8. p. 5, Lines Where and why was the 25 meter grid used? ba?trom 50 meter grid used? Why was a We need more details on the sampling design and underlying rationale.