Page 2, paragraph 4:

Several possible misinterpretations in this paragraph

should be clarified.

1.

The impression is given that if enough resources are expended,
scientific analyses and standards can define “affected” atolls.

However

complex and extensive any monitoring effort might be, any subsequent
decision still will be based upon subjective judgement.
Scientific knowledge can provide a basis for rational] decisions

regarding land use restrictions.
A radiological monitoring program, regardless of its extent, will not
lead to the establishment of a relationship between radiation exposure
and health effects.

Studies of this nature require also extensive

medical and personnel exposure records on very large populations

(hundreds of thousands of exposed and unexposed persons) and/or higher
levels of radiation exposure.

To the extent possible, the National

Academy of Sciences - National Research Council have analyzed such
relationships with available relevant data.

When applied to the

residence islands atolls of concern, except for Bikini Island, the
health risks are projected to be very small.

These relationships

would, therefore, not serve as a basis for determining “other atolls.”
Another

"standard" could be the U.S. radiation exposure limits for

the public.

This criterion, while applicable to U.S. activities, may

not be acceptable to non-U.S. interests.

Furthermore, it is not

derived from the health effect-radiation exposure relationship.

In conclusion, science can identify what radiation is present, but
it cannot define "affected;" that remains a subjective decision.

Page 3, paragraph 1, part (c):

The 174 should be 180 in order to account for

those in utero at the time.

Page 3, paragraph 2:

As indicated above, we believe that the program period

should be for a Period of 25 years, with a U.S. phase out supplemented by a
Marshallese "phase-in.”

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