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(This would be consistent with the
Statement in NVO-140, that in predicting 137,
and 90.
concentrations in
breadfruit, it is assumed that breadfruit and®pandanus' fruit will experience
the same uptake from soil.)
Page 3-63, Section 3.8.1.1.3, lines 1, 2 and 3 - This sentence should be
changed to reflect the lack of completeness of conclusive data on this subject.
Change to, "The available data indicates that the body's uptake and retention
of Pu through the gastrointestinal tract is a small percentage of the Pu
ingested. This pathway is therefore less significant than other potential
means of ingress to the body."
Page 3-63, Section 3.8.1.2, last sentence: As presented the statement is not
correct.
Sentence should read: After 15 years of wind action on Enewetak
Atoll, much of the dispersion of surface contamination has already occurred.
Further significant redistribution due to wind action seems unlikely, although
test related, radioactivity is found in surface air at detectable levels.
The dust raised by resident activities is expected to increase airborne
concentrations with further redistribution of the radioactivity."
Page 3-84, Section 3.8.2 - The fourth sentence indicates that all the Be has
been removed, but the sixth sentence indicates that there is still some Be that
needs to be cleaned up.
Suggest the paragraph be «consistent.
Page 5-3, line 1 - Change "as" to “has."
Page 5-13, Option 2 ~ This should be clarified since it does not appear
consistent with Table 5-6 in that it states "... may use food grown on Enjebi
other than pandanus and breadfruit." Whereas table indicates these are the
two that can be grown on Enjebi with the appropriate restrictions.
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Page 5-21/5-22, Section 5.4.1.1, first line - Change "islanders" to "people
of Enewetak" or "Enewetak people."
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Page 5~25, Section 5.4.2.2 - This doesn't agree with Figure 5-2 in that
5.4.2.2 implies that the southern islands are Jinedrol through Kidrenen
and limits inter-island visitation, agriculture, as well as collection of
birds and eggs to these islands whereas the figure extends the allowable
islands for these activities to include Boko, Munjor, Inedral, and Van,
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Page 3-62, last sentence in Section 3.8.1.1.1 and 3.8.1.1.2 - Breadfruit
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Page 3-57, 2nd paragraph, line 3 - Change "Enewakese" to "Enewetakese,"
or better yet "people."
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all of which are north of Jinedrol.
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Page 5-32 and 5-33 - Figure 5-3 is not consistent with text for Case 3 in
that:
Text states that residence would be restricted to Jinedrol through
Kidrenen yet the figure shows Boko, Munjor, Inedral and Van also as living
islands; both the figure (which show Enjebi as only a picnic island) and
text (page 5-34) agree that there will be no cultivation on Enjebi yet the