,. 2 Obviously, I found your paper very interesting. improvement include the following: My suggestions for 1. Brief historical summary of Bravo and radiation levels on islands. 2. Summary of your experience in the F?arshalls. 3. Your ideas for a useful educational program--making it clear that it is your idea and not a program that is either in place or provided by DOE, DOI, etc. I hope this is helpful. With~est regards, W. J. Bair, Ph.D. Manager Environment, Health and Safety Research Program WJB:ms Attachment