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Obviously, I found your paper very interesting.
improvement include the following:
My suggestions for
1.
Brief historical summary of Bravo and radiation levels
on islands.
2.
Summary of your experience in the F?arshalls.
3.
Your ideas for a useful educational program--making it clear
that it is your idea and not a program that is either in place
or provided by DOE, DOI, etc. I hope this is helpful.
With~est
regards,
W. J. Bair, Ph.D.
Manager
Environment, Health and
Safety Research Program
WJB:ms
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