W. J. Bair June 18, 1979 Page 8 31. p. 18 The authors should not use "dial-a-dose" terminology for obvious reasons! 32. Appendix 7, Line 7 The equation for D. is mixed up. of TEs and Teo? What are the definitions Also, the authors should emphasize more fully that Appendix A relates to external doses. 33. p. 18 Last line Is this the definition of maximum annual dose rate used thoughout the paper? I don't think so, but the reader could get confused. 34, It's not clear from the authors discussion of Appendix C whether the dose estimates in the main text contain the contribution from coconut assumption. Are the doses in Appendix C maximum annual doses, and are the doses for males only? 35. p. 19 I've indicated above the inadequacy of Appendix D. Last paragraph 36. p. 21, Line 14 What exactly is the "significant number" of Enewetak people interviewed? 37. p. 2] When will these Last paragraph 241 Am data be present?