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To:

U,

J. Bair

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. p18.ama7 What will the people
eliminate
blood from the list.

DATE:

think

of

Adgllat

this?

4,

1980

I wuld

11.

ITM oaptlon ‘aanoer oan occur like a
PP- 17, rlgure,
swelling
inside
or outsido cm the bodyn i.gno~ea non-aolld
cancers and may be ❑isleading.
Could ur add ‘in some
typm of canemr, however, no nuellhg
OOOUrSn.

12.

pp.

17, 2m4 oolumns.
In thn wcond line, the word “man~
implies “Oot all”.
Am there groups of people that do

not have naturti

auL9blons7

The last two aentenc~a could be queatloned
on
the
thQQrOLiCal IV’Ouoda beeauae we have not specified
Should this be related
to the
amQunt, or fadL3t,ion.
radlat,ion
reoeivwl
at Bikini?
The wrding or the last
sentence
could be chnnged b aomethlng like:
“Scientists
oannot deteot a mall
incrtaae”.
The present wording
sounds a bit like we M% teMxig them - move it!
13.

19. The last paragraph Eivw the Lmpeeaslon that if
they stay helw Lhe sLnndard no harm will occur.
Thus,

pp.

‘TCI proteot
in the nent.enoe starting
on the 7th line,
people ,,,.,.
these organi-Llon8
have recommended . . ..R
It would be bettmr M state that aolentlsts
believu
that
aom~ Mm wI1l occur with even emall amounts of
~adlatlon.
Then *to keep the mount ~f h8nm aaall . ...9.

follow

In pa~ag. 34 move ‘given on pages 21 to 27m tO
‘infcw==tlon”
and aet off with oomas.

In parag. 35 do we uanL to lndloat.e the possible
returm to their atoll?
I thought that U@ had ohanged
this .
Ik.

pp. 21 et d.
I trust that the nuabees t’or oanoers are
not the real ones.
For ar-pie,
doubling the oancor in
the next 30 yearn onaeema soneubat high.

15.

PP. 29.

Shouldn’t

thmre be a oaptlon

for tho figure.

.?nd parag.,
last stinLen@a. Do we really mean ‘th=t
it WE possible
ror ttm’e to be no dmger~7
Didn’t they
no d-ger?
say that there w

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