University ofCalif ja —- ' 410123 R. iz, \<" LOS ALAMOSSCIENTIFIC LABORATORY Post Office Box 1663 Los Alamos, New Mexico 87545 In reply refer to: Mail stop: HH-70 400 August 14, 1979 Dr. W. L. Robison University of California Lawrence Livermore Laboratory PO Box 809 Livermore, CA 94550 Dear Bill: I have put together some detailed comments on your latest draft of the Enewetak doses. Overall, I think that you have done an excellent job in the short time available. However, I find the computer printouts in the appendix (aside from external dose) less than useful because the living condition is not specified. tables labeled "living conditions - I find, Janet". for example, Each one five separate has different numbers and the correspondence to the numbers in the tables in the report is poor. . 1 would suggest a definitive label for each fastened so that it will stay with the document. Detailed comments follow. 1. pp. 4, 8, 9, 10, 11. Throughout we find the term R/h. I would guess that on pp. 4, uR/h is meant but cannot say about-the others. _ 2. pp. 9, 3rd parag., 2nd line. 3. pp. 10, lines 5 & 6. 4, 5. your map of the atoll. 30. I cannot find Tainel (Percy) on pp. 10, 2nd parag. Perhaps Dick Gilbert could tell me pp. 11, 2nd parag. Is the difference in levels between why you include the average using the MDA instead of the actual measured value. This does bias the results. the west tip of Aomon and the rest of the islands large or small? I am concerned with the probable establishment of wato's that could affect the dose to individuals. An affirmative actioniequal opportunity employer