HEADQUARTERS
TASK GROUP 7.1
JOINT TASK FORCE SEVEN
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LOS ALAMOS. NEW MEXICO
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Dear Gens:
Before leaving the Task Ferce, Perk said that any correspondence on
the History should be gent to you. I aa therefore returning to you under
separate cover one copy of the History of Operation Castie. It has been
downgraded to Secret, Restricted Data, by our classification section.
Although the contents of the draft are in generd satisfactory, I
must confess, with due apologies to the author or suthors, that the style
seens needlessly wordy md awkward.
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Mmy sentences are obscures and in-
Sy careful editing the draft could be greatly improved in clarity
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and readability; and I recommend that this be done.
The following comments apply to the sections, chapters, and paces
indicated.
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