W. J. Bair
June 18, 1979
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31.
p. 18
The authors should not use "dial-a-dose" terminology for
obvious reasons!
32.
Appendix 7,
Line 7
The equation for D. is mixed up.
of TEs and Teo?
What are the definitions
Also, the authors should emphasize more
fully that Appendix A relates to external doses.
33.
p. 18
Last line
Is this the definition of maximum annual dose rate used
thoughout the paper?
I don't think so, but the reader
could get confused.
34,
It's not clear from the authors discussion of Appendix C
whether the dose estimates in the main text contain the
contribution from coconut assumption.
Are the doses in
Appendix C maximum annual doses, and are the doses for
males only?
35.
p. 19
I've indicated above the inadequacy of Appendix D.
Last paragraph
36.
p. 21, Line 14
What exactly is the "significant number" of Enewetak
people interviewed?
37.
p. 2]
When will these
Last paragraph
241
Am data be present?