W. J. Bair
June 18, 1979
Page 4
6)
Whose idea was it to use the phrase "dial-a-dose" on page 18?
Need
I say more?
Specific Comments
1.
p. J
Is "reassessment" or resettlement" the first word in the
title?
The cover letter used the former.
either title.
I don’t like
How about "Post Cleanup Dose Assessment for
the Enewetak Atol]."
2.
p. 3,4
The introduction should outline the contents of the paper,
or else a summary and/or abstract should precede the
introduction.
3.
p. 3,4
No mention is made of the extensive soil and IMP sampling
undertaken immediately preceding and during the cleanup
operation.
A brief description or mention of this effort
should be made to tie together a more complete history of
the sampling effort.
4,
p. 4, 7 lines
from botton
The 10-15 cm increment should be included.
5.
p. 4, last line. Description of profile sampling insufficient for me to
follow completely.
6.
p. 5
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Were quality control (QC) soil samples analyzed?
Manuscript doesn't say one way or another.
The
If QC samples
were analyzed, these data should be summarized and
presented.
Documentation mustbe available to indicate
the reliability of the data.
This is a very important
point in my mind.
7.
p. 5
Lines 11,12
What laboratory did the gamma spectroscopy for '3?og9
8.
p. 5, Lines
Where and why was the 25 meter grid used?
ba?trom
50 meter grid used?
Why was a
We need more details on the sampling
design and underlying rationale.