i ' t -4 | 7] | Ln Be. anal | temennd tomenn bmeead Lnemad {name mand } Should be included with pandanus. (This would be consistent with the Statement in NVO-140, that in predicting 137, and 90. concentrations in breadfruit, it is assumed that breadfruit and®pandanus' fruit will experience the same uptake from soil.) Page 3-63, Section 3.8.1.1.3, lines 1, 2 and 3 - This sentence should be changed to reflect the lack of completeness of conclusive data on this subject. Change to, "The available data indicates that the body's uptake and retention of Pu through the gastrointestinal tract is a small percentage of the Pu ingested. This pathway is therefore less significant than other potential means of ingress to the body." Page 3-63, Section 3.8.1.2, last sentence: As presented the statement is not correct. Sentence should read: After 15 years of wind action on Enewetak Atoll, much of the dispersion of surface contamination has already occurred. Further significant redistribution due to wind action seems unlikely, although test related, radioactivity is found in surface air at detectable levels. The dust raised by resident activities is expected to increase airborne concentrations with further redistribution of the radioactivity." Page 3-84, Section 3.8.2 - The fourth sentence indicates that all the Be has been removed, but the sixth sentence indicates that there is still some Be that needs to be cleaned up. Suggest the paragraph be «consistent. Page 5-3, line 1 - Change "as" to “has." Page 5-13, Option 2 ~ This should be clarified since it does not appear consistent with Table 5-6 in that it states "... may use food grown on Enjebi other than pandanus and breadfruit." Whereas table indicates these are the two that can be grown on Enjebi with the appropriate restrictions. ~ Page 5-21/5-22, Section 5.4.1.1, first line - Change "islanders" to "people of Enewetak" or "Enewetak people." - Page 5~25, Section 5.4.2.2 - This doesn't agree with Figure 5-2 in that 5.4.2.2 implies that the southern islands are Jinedrol through Kidrenen and limits inter-island visitation, agriculture, as well as collection of birds and eggs to these islands whereas the figure extends the allowable islands for these activities to include Boko, Munjor, Inedral, and Van, | a . a 4 emmy co (ween tenn re Page 3-62, last sentence in Section 3.8.1.1.1 and 3.8.1.1.2 - Breadfruit o-- Page 3-57, 2nd paragraph, line 3 - Change "Enewakese" to "Enewetakese," or better yet "people." . 1 ~5- all of which are north of Jinedrol. A Page 5-32 and 5-33 - Figure 5-3 is not consistent with text for Case 3 in that: Text states that residence would be restricted to Jinedrol through Kidrenen yet the figure shows Boko, Munjor, Inedral and Van also as living islands; both the figure (which show Enjebi as only a picnic island) and text (page 5-34) agree that there will be no cultivation on Enjebi yet the