Fage 13, Par ih Zuis puregreph mentions the vogiirment fox, She one- whitey te complete eperaticns choamh.aidp if Bikini Atoll were contaxinated but 4% ie believed Pace 17, lines 13 anc 1, Pace 2h, Line 15 Page 26, line 7 sos prarieus gusts on te wubiect of tytom Hester. After “and add "together with the other fall-out projects". Substitute "partially" for “seon''. adc the following: “Additional information on ommunication difficulties aboard the ESTES is contained 4n APPENDIX 6.* Pace 29, lst Par Recommend that the BAIROKO effelnadine dates be added. Pace 36, Par k after "recovery" add"end generel logistic aupport™. Page 37, Par 2 The sentence beginning *Comsunications and electronics Paces 13-15 Page 1, Par 2 ecvccses” is not understood. The activities of Task Group 7.5 do not seex to be too well covered. coment. Jim Eeeves might like a chance to The problems of technical preparation for the shots (4ncluding simultanecus preparations for two locations in the latter part of the operation) and of Radiolocical- Safety operetions from afloat should at least be mentlonsd in these parerraphs. Pase 2, line 10 The sentence beginning on line 10 says "the actual physical accomplishment ..ccsee WAS greatly enlarged". is this the desired meaning? Page 2, line 3 Change "personnel" to "personnel's*, Pase & At the end of the first paracrach after "Bikini® acl anc to the agility of the paspengers*, from bovton 35°"