Fage 13, Par ih
Zuis puregreph mentions the vogiirment fox, She one-
whitey te complete eperaticns
choamh.aidp if
Bikini Atoll were contaxinated but 4% ie believed
Pace 17, lines 13
anc 1,
Pace 2h, Line 15
Page 26, line 7
sos prarieus gusts on te wubiect of tytom
Hester.
After “and add "together with the other fall-out
projects".
Substitute "partially" for “seon''.
adc the following: “Additional information on ommunication difficulties aboard the ESTES is contained
4n APPENDIX 6.*
Pace 29, lst Par
Recommend that the BAIROKO effelnadine dates be added.
Pace 36, Par k
after "recovery" add"end generel logistic aupport™.
Page 37, Par 2
The sentence beginning *Comsunications and electronics
Paces 13-15
Page 1, Par 2
ecvccses” is not understood.
The activities of Task Group 7.5 do not seex to be too
well covered.
coment.
Jim Eeeves might like a chance to
The problems of technical preparation for the shots
(4ncluding simultanecus preparations for two locations
in the latter part of the operation) and of Radiolocical-
Safety operetions from afloat should at least be mentlonsd in these parerraphs.
Pase 2, line 10
The sentence beginning on line 10 says "the actual
physical accomplishment ..ccsee WAS greatly enlarged".
is this the desired meaning?
Page 2, line 3
Change "personnel" to "personnel's*,
Pase &
At the end of the first paracrach after "Bikini® acl
anc to the agility of the paspengers*,
from bovton
35°"