Page 3-57, 2nd paragraph, line 3 - Change "Enewakese" to “Enewetakese," or better yet "people." Page 3-62, last sentence in Section 3.8.1.1.1 and 3.8.1.1.2 - Breadfruit should be included with pandanus. (This would be consistent with the Statement in NVO-140, that in predicting 137. and 90, concentrations in breadfruit, it is assumed that breadfruit and °pandanus’ fruit will experience the same uptake fron soil.) Page 3-63, Section 3.8.1.1.3, lines 1, 2 and 3 - This sentence should be chanred to reflect the tack of completeness of conclusive data on this subject. Change to, “The available data indicates that the body's uptake and retention of Pu through the gastrointestinal tract is a small percentage of the Pu ingested. This pathway is therefore less significant than other potential means of ingress to the body." ad deme Oe meee enw ne Page 3-63 Section 3.8.1.2, last sentence: As presented the statement is not correct. Sentence should read: After 15 years of wind action on Enewetak Atoll, much of the dispersion of surface contamination has already occurred. Further significant redistribution due to wind action seems unlikely, although test related radioactivity is found in surface air at detectable levels. The dust raised by resident actiyities is expected to increase airborne coucentrations with further redistribution of the radioactivity." Page 3-84, Section 3.8.2 - The fourth sentence indicates that all the Be has been removed, but the sixth sentence indicates that there is still some Be that needs to be cleaned up. Suggest the paragraph be consistent. Page 5-3, line 1 - Change "as" to "has." .Page 5-13, Option 2 - This should be clarified since it does not appear consistent with Table 5-6 in that it states “... may use food grown on Enjebi other than pandanus and breadfruit." Whereas table indicates these are the two that can be grown on Enjebi with the appropriate restrictions. « Page 5-21/5-22, aes Section 5.4.1.1, first line - Change "islanders" to "people of Enewetak" or "Enewetak people," t- Pape 5-25, Section 5.4.2.2 - This doesn't agree with Figure 5-2 in that 5.4.2.2 implies that the southern islands are Jinedrol through Kidrenen and limits inter-island visitation, apriculture, as well as collection of birds and eges to these islands whereas the figure extends the allowable tslunds for these activities to include Boko, Munjor, Inedral, and Van, all of which are north of Jinedrol. Pape 5-32 and 5-33 - Figure 5-3 is not consistent with text for Case 3 in that: Text states that residence would be restricted to Jinedrol through hidrenen yet che figure shows Boko, Munjor, Inedral and Van also as living ‘stands; both the figure (which show Enjebi as only a picnic island) and text (page 5-34) agree that there will be no cultivation on Enjebi yet the