Peee ee Page 2-1, Lines 14-15 - Should also include the fact that removal and disposal BS ie A dk i oe ten bee ee ee of plutoniun-bearing soil in the 40-400 picocuries per gram range will be decided on a case-by-case basis. Suggest also include the following change: "Poamoval and disposal of plutontun-bearing soil which excceds 400 picocuries per grom at all locations and 40 picocuries per gram on islands where housing Bay someday be located. Page 2-2, lines 9-10 - the conclusion that plutonium debris will be encrypted in the LaCrosse crater seems premature at this poinc in the DEIS. Recommend deletion of this sentence. Pege 6-4, lines 10-11 - Recommend substitution of the words “appropriate cisposal" in place of entombment with the radioactive scrap in LaCrosse center' and recommend deletion of the rest of the page. The text, as written, assumes that the entombment disposal action will be adopted. s Page 6-8, lines 10-11 ~- Recommend substitution of the words "and stored for eventual disposal" in place of "encapsulated in concrete in one or both of the craters on Runit." Pages 8-29 and 8-30, Sections &.18 and 8.19. Recommend that the ocean dumping option be left open as another possibility for disposal. Page 11-1, lines 4-5. In referring to disposal at sea, this sentence is inconsistent with previous discussions in the DEIS concerning Pu contamination disposal. However, recommend that this ocean dumping option be retained as a possibility for disposal. 3. Miscellaneous Remarks Page 3-10, last line on page - Deicte the word "light." Psge 3-12, 6th line from the top - Delete “of water." Page 3-15, Section 3.2.5, line 10 - Change “devastaged" to "devastated." Tage 3-44, lst line - Change "life" to "live." Page 3-46, Section 3.3.4.2, line 10 - Change "Engebi"' to Enjebi." Page 3-49, Section 3.5.1, 3rd paragraph - Change "patrilineal" to “ideally matrilineal" as per Tobin's paper “Land Tenure in the Marshall Islands, 1956." Essentially the iroij power comes from land holdings and land is owned by the vomen. Pape 3-52, Section 3.5.3, line 11 - Change "as island" to “an island."